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Again I'm dazed at how devout
Fate is to grant my wishes out
Into the world of actions, time, and space.

I wrote that I would like to give
to who will take, and then to live,
and sure enough, my phone Fate took in daze.

Amazing too, it's midnight tight
and barely had I popped the light
on my computer, the same Macbook Pro.

But just so everything is clear
to avoid my Mac from disappearing
I'd like to give when ready to let go.

Amazing, just two days behind,
I said not all is clean and kind,
And then I found some mean, some mad, some muck.

I have to think that Fate is quick
to wishes grant and loose parts click
when Will is cleared and opened up to luck.

Still I find myself inclined
to open unknown doors.
I'll just make sure my naïve to cure,
'fore I make up more lores.

Three years behind, minus a half,
I dared the rocks in river life.
bare weeks ahead, world at me laughed
and threw a rock right at my bike.

So now I think I'll take more care
when forces of the world I dare.
For though my mind be brave and true,
my body sometimes needs care too.